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name: apsr-literature-positioning
description: Use when positioning an American Political Science Review (APSR) manuscript against the literature so it reads as a discipline-wide contribution. APSR readers span subfields, so the paper must engage the literatures they expect and avoid the desk-rejection trigger of "failure to engage the relevant literatures." Stakes the contribution; it does not write the lit review.
---

# Literature Positioning (apsr-literature-positioning)

APSR's peer-review policy lists **"failure to engage the relevant literature(s)"** as an explicit
**desk-rejection** ground. Positioning is therefore not throat-clearing — it is survival. The goal is
to place the paper where a **general** political-science audience can see the gap and the move.

## When to trigger

- Drafting or revising the introduction and the "contribution" paragraph
- A reviewer said you "missed obvious work" or "don't engage the debate"
- Your subfield literature is solid but the paper doesn't connect to the broader discipline
- You need to distinguish your contribution from the closest prior papers

## How APSR wants the literature engaged

1. **Engage the debate, not a pile of citations.** Identify the live disagreement or open question
   your paper speaks to. Cite the works that *define* it, including across subfields where relevant.
2. **Two audiences at once.** Satisfy specialists (you know the frontier) *and* generalists (why it
   matters). The intro should make a comparativist care about an Americanist paper and vice versa.
3. **Name the gap precisely.** Not "little is known" — say what is contested, mismeasured,
   under-theorized, or untested, and why resolving it advances the field.
4. **Position the contribution as a move in the debate.** "Prior work argues X via mechanism M; we
   show M fails / is conditional on C / is better explained by M′."
5. **Pre-empt the obvious objection.** APSR reviewers are expert; acknowledge the strongest rival
   account and say how your design adjudicates it (hand off to `apsr-research-design`).

## Cross-subfield engagement (a distinctive APSR demand)

| If your paper is… | also engage… |
|-------------------|--------------|
| an empirical test of an institutional claim | the formal/theoretical literature generating the claim |
| a country/region case | the general comparative theory it speaks to |
| a measurement contribution | the substantive literatures that will use the measure |
| normative/theoretical | the empirical work the argument bears on, where applicable |

## Anti-patterns

- A "literature dump" with no organizing debate
- Engaging only your own subfield (a top APSR rejection reason)
- Strawmanning prior work, or hiding the closest competitor paper
- Self-citation that breaks anonymity (APSR is double-anonymous — see `apsr-submission`)
- Claiming "first to study" when the contribution is incremental

## Output format

```
【Debate】the live disagreement / open question
【Key works】the 3-6 that define it (incl. cross-subfield)
【Gap】what is contested / mismeasured / untested
【Move】how this paper changes the debate
【Strongest rival】and how the design will adjudicate it
【Next】apsr-theory-building
```

## Supplementary resources

- [`../../resources/official-source-map.md`](../../resources/official-source-map.md) — desk-rejection grounds incl. literature engagement