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name: conbio-revision-and-rebuttal
description: Use when writing the response to a Conservation Biology revise-and-resubmit. Decisions weigh novelty, transferability, methodological soundness, and direct conservation relevance, so the response must convert each reviewer while keeping the handling editor confident. Structures the response letter; it does not fabricate new results.
---

# Revision & Rebuttal (conbio-revision-and-rebuttal)

A *Conservation Biology* revise-and-resubmit is an invitation to convince. Decisions weigh **novelty,
transferability, methodological soundness, and direct conservation relevance**, and the call rests with
the **handling/associate editor**. So the response letter must move *every* reviewer toward yes while
keeping the editor confident the revision is convergent — and the work double-blind throughout.

## When to trigger

- A major/minor revision decision arrived and you are planning the revision + response letter
- Reviewers disagree with each other and you must reconcile their demands
- A reviewer requests analyses that would change the paper's claims or its conservation message
- Writing the cover note to the editor summarizing the revision

## Strategy

1. **Read the editor's letter as the rubric.** The editor signals which points are decisive — often
   conservation relevance, soundness, or novelty. Solve those first; the editor adjudicates
   disagreements among reviewers.
2. **One point-by-point response, every comment addressed.** Quote each comment, then respond. Never
   skip one — silence reads as non-compliance.
3. **Concede or rebut explicitly, with evidence.** For each: did what was asked (say where, with the
   new text/table number), or push back **respectfully with a reason** (ecology, design, or evidence).
   A well-argued disagreement beats a hollow capitulation that weakens the paper.
4. **Reconcile conflicting reviewers openly.** When one wants the opposite of another, say so, choose a
   principled path, and explain the tradeoff to the editor.
5. **Protect the conservation contribution.** Add analyses and caveats that strengthen relevance and
   transferability; resist changes that dilute the actionable message or over-claim beyond the design.
6. **Keep double-blind intact** in the revised manuscript, and **update the data/code package** so new
   tables/figures remain reproducible and sensitive localities stay masked (see
   `conbio-reporting-and-data-policy`).

## Response-letter format

For each reviewer comment:

```
> [Quoted reviewer comment]

Response: [What we did / why we respectfully disagree].
Change: [Section/page/table-figure number where the revision appears].
```

Open with a short **summary of the main changes** to the editor; group by reviewer; end each entry with
the location of every change so the editor can verify quickly.

## Anti-patterns

- Ignoring or merging away a comment without a visible response
- Capitulating to a request that breaks the paper's logic or its conservation message
- Defensive or dismissive tone toward reviewers
- "We thank the reviewer" with no actual change or argued reason
- Adding analyses that quietly contradict the original claim without acknowledging it
- Letting the revised manuscript or new exhibits drift out of sync with the deposited package


## Response pass for Conservation Biology

Use this as a second-pass capability check. First lock the species/system threat, conservation decision, and uncertainty relevant to action; then test whether the manuscript addresses conservation-science reviewers who ask whether evidence changes biodiversity, management, or policy action.

- **Primary move:** Separate editor-order changes from referee-specific changes; answer each major objection with manuscript edits plus a short evidence citation.
- **Decision ledger:** return `claim / evidence / blocker / next edit` rows so the next pass can patch the manuscript directly.
- **Neighbor test:** compare against Biological Conservation for applied conservation breadth, Global Change Biology for climate/ecosystem process, Ecology Letters for theory-forward ecology; if the neighboring outlet has the stronger audience claim, recommend re-routing before polishing.
- **Verification floor:** before submission-ready advice, re-open `resources/official-source-map.md` for volatile rules and name the one unresolved fact that could change the recommendation.

## Output format

```
【Editor's decisive points】addressed first? [list]
【Coverage】every reviewer comment answered? [Y/N]
【Concede vs rebut】each tagged with evidence + change location
【Reviewer conflicts】reconciled and explained to editor? [Y/N]
【Conservation message protected】no dilution / over-claim? [Y/N]
【Double-blind + package updated】[Y/N]
【Next】resubmit via ScholarOne Manuscript Central
```

## Supplementary resources

- [`../../resources/official-source-map.md`](../../resources/official-source-map.md) — decision categories, reviewer guidelines, double-blind policy