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name: editing-and-revision
description: "Turn a rough draft into finished writing through structured revision passes: cut, clarify, then polish. Use when improving your own or others' writing after the first draft exists."
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# Editing and revision

Writing is rewriting. The first draft's job is to exist; revision is where
the quality comes from. The mistake is trying to fix everything at once:
edit in passes, each with one focus, biggest problems first.

## Method

1. **Separate writing from editing.** Do not edit while drafting; the
   critical voice kills the generative one. Get the draft down, then come
   back to it, ideally after a break so you read it closer to how a
   stranger would.
2. **First pass: structure and argument.** Before touching sentences, ask
   whether the whole thing works: is the point clear, is the order right,
   does each section earn its place, is anything missing or redundant? Cut
   or move whole sections here. Polishing prose you will later delete is
   wasted work (see structure-and-flow).
3. **Second pass: cut.** Most drafts are 20-30% too long. Delete the
   redundant, the tangential, the throat-clearing, the said-twice.
   "Murder your darlings": the clever line that does not serve the point
   goes. Shorter is almost always better (see concise-writing).
4. **Third pass: clarify sentence by sentence.** Now fix the writing
   itself: vague words, buried subjects, passive voice, tangled clauses,
   ambiguous pronouns (see clear-writing). Read aloud to catch what the
   eye misses.
5. **Last pass: proofread.** Grammar, spelling, punctuation, formatting,
   consistency. This is last because there is no point proofreading a
   sentence you might cut. A separate, mechanical pass; tools help but do
   not replace it.
6. **Get a reader if the stakes justify it.** A fresh pair of eyes finds
   the confusion you are blind to (you know what you meant). Ask them
   where they got lost or bored, not whether they "liked it" (see
   design-critique's specific-question ethic, applied to prose).

## Boundaries

- Editing improves what is there; it cannot save a piece with nothing to
  say or the wrong structure, which is why the structure pass comes first
  and may send you back to rethinking.
- Over-editing sands off voice and life; know when it is good enough and
  stop (see voice-and-tone). Diminishing returns are real.
- Editing others' work is a different contract: preserve their voice and
  intent, fix problems not preferences, and separate must-change from
  nice-to-change (see giving-feedback).